Want Feedback on Your Writing?
Join the nearly 200 serious creative writers who have worked one-on-one over the past several years with award-winning author Joan Dempsey.
Joan's feedback will help you not only with your current writing project, but with every future manuscript. Get a detailed, written critique and specific guidance on how to improve your work. Master the skills you need to take your writing to the next level.
Why Get Feedback?
You're not certain you're on the right track and need guidance before you continue.
You've gotten conflicting feedback from others and need another, professional opinion.
You've done all you can and need to know what still needs to be revised.
You think you're ready to submit to agents or publishers but want to be 100% sure.
Here's What You'll Receive
- Detailed margin notes throughout your manuscript that identify what’s working and what’s not.
- Suggestions about big picture issues like the authenticity and consistency of the narrative voice, the plot, theme and story, structure, setting, characterization, point of view, and more (applies to both fiction and non-fiction).
- An assessment of your writing “tics” or habits, with suggestions for avoiding them in the next draft.
- Sentence-level suggestions for cutting out unnecessary words that clutter your prose, and guidance for using those suggestions.